Writing about Place

Anthracite Coal

Anthracite Coal

Place: We can write about place as a way of exploring and tracing our inner landscape. Feelings and memories resound like chords of music as we envision a particular place we have lived or visited. The memory unfolds and we are there with our senses enlivening the lyrical experience.

My Grandfather’s Mine: I often recall the mountain hollow in Kentucky where my grandfather farmed his small piece of bottom land, and I am—in that moment of memory—transported to the sense of wonder I felt following my grandfather into a coal mine he had dug in the back of a cave. I remember seeing facets of coal sparkle as water dripped down the walls and reflected back the light from the small kerosene lamp on my grandfather’s billed cap.

My Memories: My senses build that experience again some fifty years later—the sight of lights sparkling from the coal, the sound of trickling water finding its way down the sloping walls of the cave, the damp flow of air in the mine, and the secure touch of my father’s hand on my shoulder, guiding me along behind his father. I am once again in that place, feeling everything I felt then. My storehouse of memories opens up for me and I am caught in a moment of time evoked from the sights and sounds and touch of the past.

The Present: Today, the mine is no longer there, the mountain bulldozed down during strip mining a couple of decades after my visits. My grandfather is also long gone, dying in the 1950s from cancer of the stomach, blamed on his having been kicked in the stomach by his mule while plowing a field. Now, I am here in the 2010s, living on the prairie, far west of those Kentucky mountains, yet that land, that cave, those moments remain compelling feelings and images in my mind—a manifestation of my memories woven from the fabric of my experience.

The Prompt: What landscape do you remember? Share the images and feelings in a short piece of writing.


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Top Ten Reasons Why Writing Is Transformative

Girl Writing

Girl Writing

Writing . . .

1. lets us discover what we know.

2. lets us discover what we don’t know.

3. helps us recognize and trust the natural organizing power of our own minds.

4. spurs our thinking further.

5. moves us into reflection, which lets us consider larger, more complex relationships.

6. moves us into analysis, which  lets us examine the parts that make up the whole.

7. moves us to examine and explore our language.

8. stirs our creativity as we play with figurative language.

9. helps us find our own voice

10. reminds us that writing is a simple, natural process of self-expression that everyone can enjoy no matter the task or intention.


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